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Praed
by
Shall I kneel to a Sylvia or Celia,
Whom no one e’er saw, or may see,
A fancy-drawn Laura Amelia,
An ad libit Anna Marie?
Shall I court an initial with stars to it,
Go mad for a G. or a J.,
Get Bishop to put a few bars to it,
And print it on Valentine’s Day?
But every competent critic has seen in it the origin of the more gorgeous and full-mouthed, if not more accomplished and dexterous, rhythm in which Mr. Swinburne has written “Dolores,” and the even more masterly dedication of the first “Poems and Ballads.” The shortening of the last line which the later poet has introduced is a touch of genius, but not perhaps greater than Praed’s own recognition of the extraordinarily vivid and ringing qualities of the stanza. I profoundly believe that metrical quality is, other things being tolerably equal, the great secret of the enduring attraction of verse: and nowhere, not in the greatest lyrics, is that quality more unmistakable than in the “Letter of Advice.” I really do not know how many times I have read it; but I never can read it to this day without being forced to read it out loud like a schoolboy and mark with accompaniment of hand-beat such lines as
Remember the thrilling romances
We read on the bank in the glen:
Remember the suitors our fancies
Would picture for both of us then.
They wore the red cross on their shoulder,
They had vanquished and pardoned their foe–
Sweet friend, are you wiser or colder?
My own Araminta, say “No!”
. . . . .
He must walk–like a god of old story
Come down from the home of his rest;
He must smile–like the sun in his glory,
On the buds he loves ever the best;
And oh! from its ivory portal
Like music his soft speech must flow!
If he speak, smile, or walk like a mortal,
My own Araminta, say “No!”
There are, metrically speaking, few finer couplets in English than the first of that second stanza. Looked at from another point of view, the mixture of the comic and the serious in the piece is remarkable enough; but not so remarkable, I think, as its extraordinary metrical accomplishment. There is not a note or a syllable wrong in the whole thing, but every sound and every cadence comes exactly where it ought to come, so as to be, in a delightful phrase of Southey’s, “necessary and voluptuous and right.”
It is no wonder that when Praed had discovered such a medium he should have worked it freely. But he never impressed on it such a combination of majesty and grace as in this letter of Medora Trevilian. As far as the metre goes I think the eight-lined stanzas of this piece better suited to it than the twelve-lined ones of “Good Night to the Season” and the first “Letter from Teignmouth,” but both are very delightful. Perhaps the first is the best known of all Praed’s poems, and certainly some things in it, such as
The ice of her ladyship’s manners,
The ice of his lordship’s champagne,
are among the most quoted. But this antithetical trick, of which Praed was so fond, is repeated a little often in it; and it seems to me to lack the freshness as well as the fire of the “Advice.” On the other hand, the “Letter from Teignmouth” is the best thing that even Praed has ever done for combined grace and tenderness.
You once could be pleased with our ballads–
To-day you have critical ears;
You once could be charmed with our salads–
Alas! you’ve been dining with Peers;
You trifled and flirted with many–
You’ve forgotten the when and the how;
There was one you liked better than any–
Perhaps you’ve forgotten her now.
But of those you remember most newly,
Of those who delight or enthral,
None love you a quarter so truly
As some you will find at our Ball.